Tuesday 4 July 2017
The Quest
This weeks prompt for the 100 WC " now what do I need". We were focusing on changing the openings of our sentences and using level four punctuation. . , ? ! " " ' ... ;: ( )
In a world like no other there lived a girl. She lived with her twelve brothers in a small cottage on the edge of town. Like an abandoned dog the children were malnourished and starving. At a chance for a better home and enough food to last them a life time she set out on a quest; not knowing the danger ahead of her. She took only what she needed to survive and no more. I’ve got the unicorns hair, the golden egg. “Now what do I need?”she wondered. Continuing her journey she traveled afar finding everything she needed.
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Hello Sophie,
ReplyDeleteI love you 100WC, it's so creative. I like how you put 'Like an abandoned dog'. Do you like doing the 100WC, because I did when I did it last year.
Keep up the good work!
Prudence,
Yaldhurst Model School