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Friday, 9 June 2017

100 word challenge

Every Monday we have a new creative challenge called the 100 word challenge. This is a good writing task for learning because you have to really focus on the words you use because you only have a specific amount of word you can use.
This weeks prompt is 'the water just kept gushing out'.


 There had just been an Earthquake in downtown Chicago, it was a 8.7 magnitude. A building had collapsed and There were a 5 fatalities and countless people hurt and hospitalized. The noise was so loud that I couldn't hear a thing, there was a distinct smell of dust and blood.then an aftershock hit. I could hear something wrong. A pipe had burst and the road had fallen in. There was water everywhere and it wouldn't stop. The water just keep gushing out. Just to make everything better it was now wet and slippery. It was disastrous!
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 June 2017 at 12:03

    Kia ora Sophie,
    I think that the 100 word challenge is a really good way to write. I personally really like the 100 word challenge

    Kind regards
    Julia
    Yaldhurst Model School

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  2. Anonymous14 June 2017 at 13:15

    hey there its Chloe from yaldhurst model school i really think 100 word challenge is good. the story is kind of scary but thats fine.

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  3. Anonymous14 June 2017 at 13:22

    Hi.
    I am Elias from Yaldhurst Model School.
    I like your post about the 100 word challenge.
    I want to try it out some time.

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  4. Anonymous14 June 2017 at 14:30

    Hi Sophie,

    I absolutely love your story. It's so creative! I remember last year I did the 100WC, I really liked it. I love all the words you used, they're really descriptive.

    Keep up the great work!

    Prudence,
    Yaldhurst Model School

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  5. Anonymous21 June 2017 at 13:35

    Hi Sophie.
    My name is Mika from Yaldhurst Model School. I love your story, it's really creative. I like the 100 word challenge, but I think I did like 500 words. Your story really made me think I was really there. ◠‿◠✿*:･ﾟ✧
    From Mika (Me Ka is how you pronounce it).

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